學術干貨｜小改變大不同，SCI論文經典詞匯替換
當你在閱讀SCI文章時，是否感覺別人用的詞匯，寫的句子非常高大上？而再看看自己的，是否有種感覺：好句子都是別人的，自己卻low的一逼？當你在寫論文時，是否腦海里閃現的除了think, very, some, good…其他的都是問號？是否一句The study shown… 貫穿全文？是否感覺論文虐我千百遍，我寫論文好幾年？
不要灰心，不要沮喪，材料人教你變身術，讓你的文風瞬間變成“高富帥，白富美”。
首先！寫第一稿時，你可以暫時用very高，非常good。但是！在寫二稿時，就要將一些low的詞匯，重復的句型換成你熟悉而又陌生的詞匯、句型。替換如下：
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about. | regarding; concerning |
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always. | invariably |
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aspet. | facet; demension; sphere |
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attract one's attention. | capture one's attention |
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bad 如果bad做表語 可以有be less impressive. | dreadful; unfavorable; poor; adverse; ill |
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be against / disagree with sth . | frown on sth |
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cause. | give rise to; lead to; result in; trigger |
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common . | shared |
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communication. | interaction |
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complex | sophisticated |
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customer. | shopper; client; consumer; purchaser |
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dangerous. | perilous ; hazardous |
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different | distinctive |
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difficult. | formidable; arduous |
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famous. | distinguished |
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first / second / third. | 第一 in the first place/the first and foremost; 第二 there is one more point, I should touch on, that… ; 第三 the last but not the least |
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for example / for instance. | as an example |
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get many benefits. | reap huge fruits |
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good. | positive, favorable; rosy; promising; perfect; pleasurable; excellent; outstanding; superior |
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hardly. | little if anything; little or nothing |
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hard-working. | assiduous |
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have. | enjoy; possess 注意process是過程的意思。 |
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helpful. | beneficial;? rewarding |
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important. | crucial ; paramount |
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in my opinion. | for my part; from my own perspective |
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indicate / suggest / fear. | be indicative of; be suggestive of; be fearful of |
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many. | an army of; an ocean of; a sea of ; a multitude of ; a host of; if not most |
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more and more. | ?Increasing(ly);? growing |
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nearly / almost impossible. | next to ; virtually impossible |
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necessary. | indispensable |
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pay attention to. | pour attention into |
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people / persons. | individuals; characters; folks |
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poor. | underdeveloped ; financially-challenged |
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possible. | feasible |
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…reasons for sth. | There are several reasons behind sth |
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remember. | bear in mind that |
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sb take interest in / sb. be interested in. | sth appeals to sb; sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb |
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show. | demonstrate ; manifest |
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so. | consequently; accordingly |
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some. | a slice of; quiet a few |
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thing. | affair, business; matter |
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think. | harbor the idea that; take the attitude that; hold the view that; it is widely shared that;? it is universally acknowledged that |
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typical. | quintessential |
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unnecessary / avoidable. | hardly necessary; hardly inevitable… |
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very. | overwhelmingly; exceedingly; extremely; intensely |
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want. | desire |
不要老用一個觀點詞，連接詞。相同意思，多種句型也會讓你的文章與眾不同。
- 通常由數據推斷出一定的結論用Results；indicate；infer；suggest；imply that…
- 最常見的引述別人觀點的詞匯
（1）不要每次寫到研究時總用study，可以用些其它的詞匯比如examine, work；
Much of the research in sexual selection in the last two decades has examined how a female’s preference that does not influence her immediate reproductive success can still evolve if it is genetically correlated with another character under direct selection.
（2）在引述別人的觀點時，如果不能完全同意，使用state比show更加中立些；
Two hypotheses for female preference evolution—runaway sexual selection and good genes selection—state that preferences evolve indirectly because they are genetically? correlated with male traits that are under direct selection; that is, the preferences themselves are not under direct selection.
（3）suggest一種較為客觀的引述觀點的表達方法；
Studies of receiver biases suggest that such analogies might not be broadly applicable.
（4）argue引用別人觀點的表述；
Burley argued that the preference for red beaks is adaptive because it? indicates male health, and this preference is then transferred to leg-band color.
（5）根據…
According to the anti-monotony hypothesis, habituation plays an important role in the evolution of complex vocalizations in songbirds: Increased song complexity reduces habituation of neighboring males and courting females.
- 常見的連接詞
However, also, in addition, consequently, afterwards, moreover, Furthermore, further, although, unlike, in contrast, Similarly, Unfortunately, alternatively, parallel results, In order to, despite, For example, Compared with, other results, thus, therefore…
當然，這些詞匯只是輔助內容，要想內容豐富，還得腳踏實地的做個科研狗。
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